可以幫我寫一小篇文章嗎? - 職場
By Queena
at 2014-12-26T20:26
at 2014-12-26T20:26
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大家好,
我們公司是做機械零件加工,CNC做零件。
因之前廠內量具只有游標卡尺,對客戶工件尺寸要求常常量不準
而被退貨(客戶是用3次元量)。為了這個原因,我們最近買了一
台2.5次元測量儀,希望在自檢時會更準,退貨次才會減少。
不過我想用email傳給幾間客戶,讓他們知道我們買了一台2.5次元。
是否有文筆不錯的大大幫我看看要怎麼寫才好,拜託囉~~
PS:
以下是我自己擬的內容,但覺得寫得很爛,大家看看就好:
=========================================
有鑑於之前工件尺寸不良,退貨次數偏多,近期敝司特別買進「2.5次元影像+探計
測量儀」,尺寸精度達μm。
相信我們在往後交貨前的自檢將會更加精確,除了使貴司工件組裝更準確之外,亦可
提高機台的良率,感謝繼續再支持,亦歡迎隨時參觀及再給我們指教。
=========================================
CNC鄉民
--
我們公司是做機械零件加工,CNC做零件。
因之前廠內量具只有游標卡尺,對客戶工件尺寸要求常常量不準
而被退貨(客戶是用3次元量)。為了這個原因,我們最近買了一
台2.5次元測量儀,希望在自檢時會更準,退貨次才會減少。
不過我想用email傳給幾間客戶,讓他們知道我們買了一台2.5次元。
是否有文筆不錯的大大幫我看看要怎麼寫才好,拜託囉~~
PS:
以下是我自己擬的內容,但覺得寫得很爛,大家看看就好:
=========================================
有鑑於之前工件尺寸不良,退貨次數偏多,近期敝司特別買進「2.5次元影像+探計
測量儀」,尺寸精度達μm。
相信我們在往後交貨前的自檢將會更加精確,除了使貴司工件組裝更準確之外,亦可
提高機台的良率,感謝繼續再支持,亦歡迎隨時參觀及再給我們指教。
=========================================
CNC鄉民
--
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