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碩士班為海洋大學-生物科技研究所,在學期間,利用自行組裝的機台-氫化冷阱原子吸收光砷物種分析系統(hydride generation-packed cold finger trap-atomic absorption spectromertric system,HG-PCF-AAS),分析海洋中的微量重金屬元素。擔任過分析化學助教及實驗室的行政總務與班上的總務,充滿服務的熱忱以至於有良好的人際關係。研究所兩年,充分的訓練自我思考並解決問題的能力以及人際關係之經營, 相信這將有助於踏入職場的我。
I graduated from National Taiwan Ocean University and majored in bioscience and biotechnology science. My graduation these was applying arsenic speciation variation for environmental stress diagnostics in continent shelf, it is about developing HG-PCF-AAS to analyze the traces of heavy mental in marine. Had held the post of the analytic chemistry assistant、laboratory and class’s administrator, I worked with enthusiasm so well that I have a good interpersonal relationship. During that moment, I trained independent thinking、solved the problems and established interpersonal relationship well.
3.工作經歷
退伍後，民國98年投入職場的第一份工作即在行政院衛生福利部食品藥物管理局，主要為協助重金屬的檢測與方法開發，以IPC-MS、ICP-OES與HPLC-HG-AFS進行多種重金屬與物種之分析，並建立實驗方法的確校性，協助公告檢驗方法的進行。另外也配合食品安安全事件的發生，參與食用油中酸價的檢測分析工作。擔任研究助理的工作，五年期間在公家單位的豐富資源下，學習重金屬含量檢測技術及食品中成分分析，熟悉許多儀器操作與困難排除。
Work experiences
My first work in 2009 was a research assistant in Taiwan Food and Drug Administration (TFDA). During this period of time, I mainly assist to investigate heavy mental and develop method by ICP-MS、ICP-OES and HPLC-HG-AFS but also to establish experimental method validation and assist to public the method. In addition, I also participated in food safety events. Therefore, I obtained a lot of wonderful experience regarding investigating heavy mental in food、operating instrument and removing difficulties.