新鮮人自傳求批閱 (僅前言部份) - 職場
By Charlie
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希望自己的自傳讓人留下深刻的印象,請問各位前輩以下這段前言
會不會讓人感到不愉快,造成反效果;或是多餘了點呢?
我是XXX,今年23歲,父親在我三歲時罹患肝癌過世,母親身兼慈母與嚴父的角色獨力
養育我成人。小學的時候和母親一起看了一部電影,內容講述出身單親家庭的孩子學壞走
上歧路,旁人總是說三道四聊著:這就是單親家庭的不幸。母親以此片叮囑我,不要成為
另一個世人閒言閒語的對象,而要努力成為一個正面、令人讚賞的榜樣,這樣的叮囑成為
我警惕、激勵自己的核心思想。認真向學加上不錯的頭腦,我在求學階段保持優異的成績
,順利從台大XX系畢業。
懇請各位前輩不吝指教,非常感謝!
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會不會讓人感到不愉快,造成反效果;或是多餘了點呢?
我是XXX,今年23歲,父親在我三歲時罹患肝癌過世,母親身兼慈母與嚴父的角色獨力
養育我成人。小學的時候和母親一起看了一部電影,內容講述出身單親家庭的孩子學壞走
上歧路,旁人總是說三道四聊著:這就是單親家庭的不幸。母親以此片叮囑我,不要成為
另一個世人閒言閒語的對象,而要努力成為一個正面、令人讚賞的榜樣,這樣的叮囑成為
我警惕、激勵自己的核心思想。認真向學加上不錯的頭腦,我在求學階段保持優異的成績
,順利從台大XX系畢業。
懇請各位前輩不吝指教,非常感謝!
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