英文履歷指正(下半段) - 工程師
By Isla
at 2014-11-08T00:00
at 2014-11-08T00:00
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我叫CHT,今年三十二歲一名從事電子業的工程師,從幾年前就想學好英文,但是一直沒執行這個動作,最近我決心要開始學習英文,從發音開始學習,從Youtube上學習如何自然發音、字首跟字根一個一個背單字根一些技巧,雖然讀了會忘,但還是從忘記部分再讀,我知道自己的英文底子真的很差,但我還是厚著臉皮用自己意思把履歷翻譯成英文,希望大家能夠指正文法、大小寫跟註解說明哪裡錯誤。
翻譯履歷如下:
My work process: My frist job is an assistant engineer in TSMC. This job let me learned the better work attitude. During Jamicon company, I am an assistant eletronic engineer. Job description is ballast research and design, Circuit block are EMI circuit, RC circuit, semi-bridge circuit, LC serial circuit. Learned painted schematic, builded BOM, check gerber file, mark sample, use AC source, DC power supply, Oscilloscope, to adjust circuit and EMI test, reliability test, open/short test. Another, learned T-core, EE and EF core transfomer to make, soldering iron, flux, OrCAD, CAM350 software. Furthermore, how to connect. During Radiant company, I am a eletronic engineer. I major design Microchip PIC33F Series MCU peripheral circuit. In those time, I learned Altium Designer Soft how to painted layout.
Finally, I think my personality are hardworking, positive, studying. Hope you would give me a chance for interview. Thank you for reading.
已更新項目:
1.你太謙虛了、我本身英文很破,自己都心知肚明。
2.若是給本國企業呢?在上半段中有人提到本國企業用中文履歷格式。
3.本身這個文章的上半段,我真的從自己的出生環境寫起。https://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/question?q...
翻譯履歷如下:
My work process: My frist job is an assistant engineer in TSMC. This job let me learned the better work attitude. During Jamicon company, I am an assistant eletronic engineer. Job description is ballast research and design, Circuit block are EMI circuit, RC circuit, semi-bridge circuit, LC serial circuit. Learned painted schematic, builded BOM, check gerber file, mark sample, use AC source, DC power supply, Oscilloscope, to adjust circuit and EMI test, reliability test, open/short test. Another, learned T-core, EE and EF core transfomer to make, soldering iron, flux, OrCAD, CAM350 software. Furthermore, how to connect. During Radiant company, I am a eletronic engineer. I major design Microchip PIC33F Series MCU peripheral circuit. In those time, I learned Altium Designer Soft how to painted layout.
Finally, I think my personality are hardworking, positive, studying. Hope you would give me a chance for interview. Thank you for reading.
已更新項目:
1.你太謙虛了、我本身英文很破,自己都心知肚明。
2.若是給本國企業呢?在上半段中有人提到本國企業用中文履歷格式。
3.本身這個文章的上半段,我真的從自己的出生環境寫起。https://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/question?q...
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By Yedda
at 2014-11-10T06:30
at 2014-11-10T06:30
看得出你應該優秀,英文其實也能溝通。那我就冒昧建議了:得先確定這篇文的「目的」,和「讀者」,然後認真思考文章結構。最後再談修正文法等。 1) 文章結構 若目的 = 請給面試機會,讀者若是美系外商的人事主管,他要看的是resume (履歷)和cover letter (自我介紹信,簡短)。若是本國,要履歷和 ”自傳”。從讀者觀點看,您這篇第一個問題,它並非”履歷”,履歷是照格式條列,不該是文章。第二,這篇若做為cover letter,太長,應縮到1/3左右,而且欠重點。若是英文自傳,也應強調重點並縮短些。 先假設給外商的,首段只要1~2句,”絕對”不要說什麼我生長於哪裡。必須開門見山,說我來爭取經理職位或高階工程師,如:I am very interested in the position ofEngineering Manager. I believe this is agreat opportunity for both the company and myself, since I have the rightskills and experience to contribute at this position. 接下來通常只一段,五句話以內,若必要再多一段吧。把你最強的牌打出來,也許只說一件,工作經驗裡最強最能打動新雇主的一件。至多說三件事,例如第二我連閒暇都愛玩技術,根本是超強駭客,第三我向來仍和同事合作良好,積極奉獻。 最後一段要求面試、聯絡方式等,客套結尾。找參考公式。 「目的」和「讀者」,決定文章重點和結構。好像老話,但是認真想過後,寫出來的東西真的不同。想,讀者若是老師,他會看完打分數還你。若是雇主、人事主管呢,也許看兩句不合意,就扔了。但我看過很多自傳,開頭從我生長哪裡、兄弟姊妹、小學唸哪裡一直寫下去,雇主不在乎這些啊。溝通方式還是要多想想,掌握重點,比較有成功機會。 2) 英文訂正 簡單如下。中間技術部分省略,你挑重要的寫,其實這些多數該在”履歷”裡。在文章裡很不容易讀。提醒注意過去式和拼字。 My career started as an assistant engineer at TSMC. This demanding job allowed me to build a positiveattitude and efficient work habits. Inmy last position at Radiant company as an electronic engineer, I completed thedesign of microchip xxxx. My skillsinclude (列舉幾項). I am hard working and motivated to learn newthings on my own. I am excited about the opportunity. My resume is attached, and I would like tohave an interview to discuss more. Pleasecontact me by e-mail or phone number below. Sincerely,xxxx(網頁問題,英文字間空格莫名被刪,請注意。包涵)
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