麻煩將下列文字翻譯成英文-不要使用翻譯器的
敬啟者
我對貴公司設備維修工程師的職務有興趣。我有一年以上的助理工程師經驗可以提供給您。附上我的履歷並期盼能有為貴公司工作的機會。
我最近的經驗是為一家IC設計業操作實驗一個觸控式系統。我負責所有的產品實驗，包括操作機台。此外，。
身為 貴公司的設備維修工程師，我將會把焦點放在您的機台設備的品質和操作維修上。而且，我和其他人合作愉快並擁有專案管理經驗。
我會於近日打電話給您以確定適當的面試時間。 承蒙您的幫忙，謝謝。
誠摯地,
已更新項目:
Respected one I service engineer's duty to your firm equipment to have the interest. I have one year above assistant engineer to experience may provide to you. The enclosed my personal history and hopes for can the promising your firm work opportunity.
2 個已更新項目:
My recent experience is IC the design industry operation tests one to touch controls the type system. I am responsible for all product experiment, including operation radio station. In addition. The body services engineer for your firm's equipment,
3 個已更新項目:
I will place the focal point in your radio station equipment's quality and the operation service. Moreover, I and other people cooperate happy and have the project management experience.
4 個已更新項目:
I in recently will telephone to give you by to determine the suitable interview time. Is indebted your help, thanks. Sincerely,
這是使用翻譯器所翻譯出來的 如果可以幫我檢查他的語法是否正確
敬啟者
我對貴公司設備維修工程師的職務有興趣。我有一年以上的助理工程師經驗可以提供給您。附上我的履歷並期盼能有為貴公司工作的機會。
我最近的經驗是為一家IC設計業操作實驗一個觸控式系統。我負責所有的產品實驗，包括操作機台。此外，。
身為 貴公司的設備維修工程師，我將會把焦點放在您的機台設備的品質和操作維修上。而且，我和其他人合作愉快並擁有專案管理經驗。
我會於近日打電話給您以確定適當的面試時間。 承蒙您的幫忙，謝謝。
誠摯地,
已更新項目:
Respected one I service engineer's duty to your firm equipment to have the interest. I have one year above assistant engineer to experience may provide to you. The enclosed my personal history and hopes for can the promising your firm work opportunity.
2 個已更新項目:
My recent experience is IC the design industry operation tests one to touch controls the type system. I am responsible for all product experiment, including operation radio station. In addition. The body services engineer for your firm's equipment,
3 個已更新項目:
I will place the focal point in your radio station equipment's quality and the operation service. Moreover, I and other people cooperate happy and have the project management experience.
4 個已更新項目:
I in recently will telephone to give you by to determine the suitable interview time. Is indebted your help, thanks. Sincerely,
這是使用翻譯器所翻譯出來的 如果可以幫我檢查他的語法是否正確
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敬啟者 [應該是“逕啟者”— 總不至於要對方很恭敬的打開此信吧？]
Dear Sir/Madam:
我對貴公司設備維修工程師的職務有興趣。我有一年以上的助理工程師經驗可以提供給您。附上我的履歷並期盼能有為貴公司工作的機會。
I am very interested in the opening of the facility maintenance and service engineer position. I have more than one year of experience as an assistant engineer to offer. Attached please find my resume. I am truly looking forward to serving in your corporation.
我最近的經驗是為一家IC設計業操作實驗一個觸控式系統。我負責所有的產品實驗，包括操作機台。此外，身為貴公司的設備維修工程師，我將會把焦點放在您的機台設備的品質和操作維修上。而且，我和其他人合作愉快並擁有專案管理經驗。
My most recent experience is the operation and experiment of a touch control system for an IC design company. I was in charge of all the product tests, including the operation of the machine tool. In addition, should I become a facility maintenance and service engineer at your corporation, I will focus on the quality and maintenance of your machine tool facilities. I will also exercise my project management experience, and ensure a pleasant working relationship with others.
我會於近日打電話給您以確定適當的面試時間。 承蒙您的幫忙，謝謝。
I will contact you by phone shortly to arrange an appointment for interview. Thank you very much for your help.
誠摯地,
Sincerely,
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