Paragraphs in an essay - 工管

Interesting note my friend—but you are correct, there should be no subtitles
in your final essays. Feel free to reach out to us, we can send you some
sample essays from our clients who have successfully been admitted to the top
schools. You will see lots of different approaches, but no subtitles. J
Looking forward to hearing from you off-line…

Jon Frank
HBS 2005
Co-Founder Precisio Essay
http://www.precisionessay.com

※ 引述《cindy0416 (ptt)》之銘言：
: I've recently started to read some sample essays and hope to learn from
: them how to organize my stories better, then a question came into my mind:
: I have never seen any "subtitle" in any sample essay. Is it not the
: usual way of English writing? Using a subtitle to highlight the main
: point of a specific paragraph is one of my writing habits, but I'm not
: sure if it's accepted in writing an application essay.
: I appreciate if anyone can share his/her insight with me~

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