新鮮人履歷求批(英文) - 履歷

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個人學經歷背景:淡江資管畢 116 MBA

欲應徵之職務:這份CL是我投實習時寫的 未來想走行銷相關工作
其實目前還沒畢業 所以根本連新鮮人都還不算
只是想先為未來作準備 看自己還不足哪裡
所以麻煩大家大力的批吧QQ~~謝謝

自傳履歷內容:

Dear Hiring Manager,

My name is XXX, Ryder is my nickname, and I am currently studying
for a MBA degree at National Cheng Kung University. Yahoo, the giant of the
internet, is the greatest company in the internet services industry. Yahoo
was established in 1995. The first website I visited was YAHOO.COM.TW. At
that time, I thought Yahoo liked a magic world. I could find anything I want
on Yahoo. Nowadays, Yahoo is not only a search website but also a life
assistant. Above all, I really love Yahoo so much and I am passionate about
internet and mobile marketing. That is why I am interested in pursuing a
Mobile Marketing Internship position at your firm, and have enclosed my
resume and background information below.

I am currently interning as a marketing assistant at ASUS Corporation. I have
been working closely with the senior marketing executive on several new
product promotion, planning the press conference, researching the market
trends and dealing with consumers’ feedbacks. In addition, I had chance to
learn what internet marketing is and how to promote the products through the
internet. The things impressed me the most is that I made a slogan for a
product and it was used on every posters and catalogs. Through this
experience, I have developed analytical skill and honed my knowledge of
marketing and communication skill.

I am an enthusiastic, pleasant and open-minded person. Therefore, my friends
usually described me as a good team player. I believe that teamwork is always
better than individual. And the reason I got good GPA is I am a quick
learner, especially the thing about computer and internet. Given my
experience in marketing and personality, I think I am a strong candidate. I
look forward to joining and contributing to your firm.

A copy of my resume is enclosed for your reference. I would appreciate an
opportunity to discuss my qualifications at your earliest convenience. I can
be reached at 0912-xxxooo or via email at [email protected]. Thank you
for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

XXX

Enclosure: Curriculum Vitae


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All Comments

Aaliyah avatarAaliyah2015-06-23
華碩實習學到什麼可以寫寫
Charlotte avatarCharlotte2015-06-26
個人特質移到第一段比較好,興趣要寫
Adele avatarAdele2015-06-28
可以用個簡歷形式
Ophelia avatarOphelia2015-07-01
我覺得還不錯啊,原po多益至少900吧
Valerie avatarValerie2015-07-04
可以不用介紹yahoo,第一段寫你為什麼要申請這職位
Adele avatarAdele2015-07-08
一開始要寫上公司名稱和你要的職位
Robert avatarRobert2015-07-12
歌頌yahoo幹嘛,全刪阿
Dinah avatarDinah2015-07-15
1.一個句子只能有一個動詞 2.yahoo的背景跟你的自傳一
點關係都沒有
Odelette avatarOdelette2015-07-18
"I thought Yahoo liked a magic world."這句文法有錯
Hedy avatarHedy2015-07-20
你可以把yahoo的歷史跟你admire Yahoo的原因寫成cover
letter的形式 適當的運用小標分段
Callum avatarCallum2015-07-25
同個句子的時態要一致 不能一下過去式 一下現在式
Lydia avatarLydia2015-07-27
全篇幾乎都沒舉例---致命傷! 盡量別把自傳真的當自
傳或作文,更何況你念過MBA, 東西應該更專業才是。
好的自傳,應該直接點出自己的強項跟人格特質,符合
你所想應徵的職缺,並舉例!
Lily avatarLily2015-07-30
光是第一段 就可能被刪了 英文履歷請簡單扼要
Puput avatarPuput2015-07-31
提一下 你的專長 或曾實習的經歷 拜託舉個例子
能給具體的數字更好 像是我擔任社長 社員成長兩倍之類
Candice avatarCandice2015-08-03
Quick learner? Good condidate? Why should I trust y
ou?
Rae avatarRae2015-08-07
你是想表達yahoo像一個magical world嗎?@@ 印象中like
解釋為“如同”時,是當介係詞使用
Todd Johnson avatarTodd Johnson2015-08-08
你的那句是作為動詞使用,譯成yahoo喜歡魔法世界XD
Madame avatarMadame2015-08-09
看到長串yahoo介紹就end了...可以開門見山描述swot嗎?
Genevieve avatarGenevieve2015-08-13
求cv的字體XD,覺得順眼好看
Christine avatarChristine2015-08-14
這CV表格很眼熟 same as me
Catherine avatarCatherine2015-08-16
該不會都是同一個網站來的~XD
Tom avatarTom2015-08-20
你CV裡時間present有網站說要用the present
Heather avatarHeather2015-08-22
可以去Lang-8網站登入,有外國網友會幫你改
Liam avatarLiam2015-08-25
第二段工作經驗可多秀一些,這段是牛肉!