新鮮人英文求職信求批 - 求職

Kyle avatar
By Kyle
at 2016-12-26T15:42

Table of Contents

個人學經歷背景: 成大企管碩士

欲應徵之職務: Garena儲備幹部計畫

自傳履歷內容:

Dear Hiring Manager,

My name is ooo and ooo is my nickname. I earned my master degree
in business administration from National Cheng Kung University in 2016.
Garena is famous for games. However, the most attractive to me is your vision
and goal. Garena not only wants to be a game provider but also wants to be a
consumer internet platform provider. Just like your slogan “connecting the
dots”. I always would like to be a “dot” to connect each person and make
this world better together. The most important is I am so passionate about
the internet and the electronic commerce. That is why I am interested in this
program.

In 2015, I joined (A company) during the summer vacation, the company which is
running the most popular SMS app in Taiwan. In the two months, I was a member
of the PR team. I assisted in holding the press conference, writing the press
releases, and I had been interviewed by TV news for three times. I learned
how to interact with the journalist and knew how to attract media’s
attention. Moreover, I acted as the contact window for a crossover PR event.
To be a good project owner, I had a responsibility to contact PR agency and
our partner simultaneously to discuss and confirm every detail thing, even
the color of microphone brand. In this project, I planned, developed and
implemented it with my colleagues’ assistance. I learned how to make
decisions quickly but carefully. I also found the importance of teamwork, so
I enhance my interpersonal and organizational skills from this project. To
sum up, I not only made a lot of friends in this 8 weeks, but also recognized
how to work effectively and efficiently in an internet company.

Two years ago, I interned as a marketing assistant at (B company). During the year.
I had been working closely with senior marketing executives on several new
product promotions, planning the press conference, researching the market
trend and dealing with consumer feedback. In addition, I had a chance to
learn what internet marketing is and how to promote the products through the
internet. What impressed me the most was I made a slogan for a product and it
was used on every poster and catalog. Through this internship, I have
developed analytical skill and honed my knowledge of marketing and
communication skill.

I am an enthusiastic, pleasant and open-minded person. Therefore, my friends
usually described me as a good team player. I believe that teamwork is always
better than individual. And the reason I got good GPA is I am a quick
learner, especially the thing about computer and the internet. Given my
experience and personality, I think I am a strong candidate. I look forward
to joining and contributing to your firm.

A copy of my resume is enclosed for your reference. I would appreciate an
opportunity to discuss my qualifications at your earliest convenience. I can
be reached at 0912-345678 or via email at [email protected]. Thank you
for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

OOO

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All Comments

Agatha avatar
By Agatha
at 2016-12-27T22:55
Could you please write down the "specific" result?
Noah avatar
By Noah
at 2016-12-28T09:59
for example, how many public are attracted by you
or what kine of achievement do you fulfill?
Megan avatar
By Megan
at 2016-12-30T21:29
the above listed is like a conversation instead of
a outstanding introduction
Ursula avatar
By Ursula
at 2017-01-02T05:13
看的出來很努力準備內容,但求職信來講太長了,基本上
以三段限,第一段你是透過甚麼管道知道這個職缺的信息
Tristan Cohan avatar
By Tristan Cohan
at 2017-01-04T09:21
應徵的動機是甚麼,然後你有甚麼能力足以勝任(用關鍵
Hardy avatar
By Hardy
at 2017-01-08T08:12
字,第二段再針對第一段提到的能力做進一步詳述,第三
Ethan avatar
By Ethan
at 2017-01-11T23:55
段則可著重在軟性技能描述。
Christine avatar
By Christine
at 2017-01-16T23:49
你一天用四成電,愛瘋稱不了的,有充電的我看第一段就不
想看了,好長,拜託你早點進入正題
Ethan avatar
By Ethan
at 2017-01-18T06:38
你把第一段閃了,倒數第二段拿去當開頭
Sandy avatar
By Sandy
at 2017-01-20T14:04
你的英文有待加強
Ula avatar
By Ula
at 2017-01-23T19:56
文法不好盡量用條列式寫重點 不然一看就錯一堆...
Olga avatar
By Olga
at 2017-01-26T11:51
wants 重複兩次可拿掉後方的
Lydia avatar
By Lydia
at 2017-01-27T07:19
the most important is I 文法錯 重寫
Anonymous avatar
By Anonymous
at 2017-02-01T05:28
文法有些問題 找個native 幫你看 我懶得看了
Hazel avatar
By Hazel
at 2017-02-06T01:06
文法幾乎每句都有點問題 最好上網找範例修改比較好
Harry avatar
By Harry
at 2017-02-06T16:03
不然與其一下被人看出缺點 不如不要附
Ursula avatar
By Ursula
at 2017-02-10T18:10
光是第一段就有點「卡」,讀不順以致於無法讓人順利地看完
全部的文章!
Andy avatar
By Andy
at 2017-02-13T20:16
Google "cover letter". 會有一些範例可參考

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