英文翻譯自傳翻譯 - 工作

Rebecca avatar
By Rebecca
at 2012-07-17T00:00

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下方是我的自傳,想請高手幫我翻譯成英文自傳,因英文撰寫較弱,還請高手協助,感謝再感謝~
我生長在標準的小家庭當中,經濟狀況中等,家人間彼此相處也極為融洽。自小就遺傳了爸媽生性開朗、不拘小節的個性,此種特質也使得我很容易與人相處,人際關係頗佳;父母對於我的管教採取自由發展的方式,而從小具有強列好奇心的我,有更多機會可以不斷接觸自己有興趣事物,閒暇之餘的我常運動,聽音樂,唱歌,基本上動靜皆可。
在校時主修自動化工程系,範圍涵括了電子,電機,機械等相關內容,同時也參予了學校軍樂隊的社團,強盛之期甚至與台積電簽署運動會協助演奏的合同長達三年,並且於西門町人行步道啟用典禮進行開幕演奏,種種的榮耀促使我在團體生活以及追求更高的榮譽心非常的執著,也讓我在退伍後進到公司可以擁有嚴以律己,且遵從公司規章運作之觀念,這對我日後的業務工作上具有相當大的影響。
畢業至今已經十年多,從卡氏汽車美容基層業務一路晉升至主力營業點之店長,業績的達成率以及員工的管理上,都付出了相當多的努力,這段時間讓我的經驗伴隨薪資的增加而累積,也讓我離開之於增添不捨,進到高林企業服飾業,雖與先前工作大不相同,但所需之業務經驗仍然如出一轍,這將近三年的經驗累積,使我了解隔行如隔山需付出相當多的心力來保有我的企圖心與戰鬥力,因為考慮週休之工作較為穩定,毅然決然離開並進入現仍在職的恩泰企業有限公司,客戶範圍涵蓋了各大有線無線電視台,電信媒體,系統業者,公家機關,除了行銷之外,業務性質包括了企劃書撰寫,推廣設備並進行系統整合,繪製系統架構圖,工程圖,概念圖,將複雜的播出流程精化成更加智慧之系統,這公司代給我的不單單只有週休,也帶給我人生中不曾踏入之領域,廣告行銷這工作雖然對我並不熟析,但依照我現有之工作經驗以及電腦作業系統之能力,足以勝任業務相關要求。
當我在業務的這段時間內,除業務所需具備的溝通以及行銷之外,也向工程師虛心請教關於office系統以及繪圖系統,也繼續進修日文以及英文,以因應未來公司可能需要之技能,工作對我而言在於累積經驗以及成長個人本職學能,我希望在我的人生藍圖上能夠令其豐富化,因此我期盼每個工作我都能夠戰戰兢兢,實事求是,已達到公司與個人皆能夠因我的存在優化其公司組織。
Update:
各位的意見我非常認同也明白,針對英文自傳我其實也沒頭緒,minerva_l說的對,我也不懂我這樣的翻譯有無效果,身邊的朋友在台灣上班的都是以中翻英加上人力銀行的範本,導致我們也認為這樣的英文履歷是有作用的,謝謝!!我會聽取閣下的意見,我自行再寫上

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Adele avatar
By Adele
at 2012-07-20T04:34
您好~~以下是我的翻譯:
I grow at the small family of standard among, in the economic condition etc., family each other gets along with also extremely harmonious.From small have already inheritted mama Ba's born nature bright and bumbling personality, this kind of characteristic also makes me very easy to get along with others, the relationship is rather good;The way that the parents teach to adopt a free development to my tube, and had strong row curiosity since the childhood of I, there were more chances to continuously get in touch with oneself to have interest thing, spare time of I often exercised and listenned to music and sang a song, basically action all can. At the school major in to automate an engineering department, the scope included an electronics, electrical engineering, related contents like machine,etc, also joined the association of military band in the school at the same time, strong of expect to even sign the contract that sports games help gives musical performance with TSMC to be as long as three years, and go a trail to be in use at the person of XiMending the ceremony carry on opening to give musical performance, various honors make me live in the group and pursue higher heart of honor persists very much and also let I at retire from the army the juniors to company can own to be strict with oneself, and follow male
希望我的回答對您有幫助~~
如果有錯~~
那非常抱歉~~
可以的話要選我為最佳解答喔~~
Daph Bay avatar
By Daph Bay
at 2012-07-21T15:15
這樣的自傳, 大概只有台灣或是大陸華人公司才會看.
外商公司看到這樣的自傳, 即使是英文版, 我們一律丟廢紙回收箱.
2012-07-18 01:14:44 補充:
在美國找工作沒有人會寫把祖宗八代拿出來寫在求職自傳上.
寫簡歷, 是要你用短篇幅說服人事主任, 讓他知道你憑什麼可以到他們公司上班.
讓他對你好奇, 進而仔細推敲你的履歷表.
你跟他講考慮日後退休, 跟他講你遺傳父母什麼什麼, 離開前面的公司多傷感, 這跟他找未來員工有什麼關聯痛癢 ? 你父母的優點不見得是你的. 個性開朗, 四面八方交際可是完不了一樣工, 一點屁用的沒有. 換做是你, 你會雇這樣的人嗎 ?
易身處地, 你覺得這樣的簡歷有多少用 ?
這根本不是翻譯問題, 完全是沒辦法針對重點回答問題.
2012-07-18 22:06:32 補充:
你要看真的英文簡歷, 去 LinkedIn.com, 隨便翻, 一大票真槍實彈的簡歷在上面讓你參考. 看 Summary 就行了.
2012-07-23 23:08:08 補充:
看著你這個版本, 實在很難寫你的簡歷.
因為從你的中文版, 實在沒有東西可以改寫成英文簡歷, 你就參考一下吧,
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Highly self-motivated individual seeking opportunity to contribute10+ years of hand-on experience in marketing, electronic engineering, and related management fields.
Proven fast learner and leadership, delivered projects on-time and within budgets.
Can work independently and great team player to complete tasks assigned.
Proficient in English and Japanese, native in Chinese / mandarin.
Connor avatar
By Connor
at 2012-07-17T16:16
001 是翻譯軟體翻的杷
Heather avatar
By Heather
at 2012-07-17T09:22
I grew up in the standard small family economic conditions, medium and family members are getting along extremely harmonious. Childhood genetic parents very outgoing, sloppy personality, such characteristics also makes me very easy to get along with others, interpersonal relationships quite well; parents to take the free development of the discipline, while small in strong curiosity I have more opportunities to continue to contact their own interest in things, spare time, regular exercise, listening to music, singing, basically movement can be.
In school majoring in automation engineering, scope covers electronics, electrical, mechanical and other related content, but also to participate in the school marching societies, the prosperity of the period and even signed with TSMC Games contract to assist in playing up to three years, and the opening ceremony of the opening of the play, all the glory that led me to very persistent in the community life and the pursuit of a higher honor, let me company may have retired backward to exercise self-discipline, and to comply with company rules and regulations the concept of the operation of the West Gate pedestrian trails, which has a considerable impact on future business work.
Graduated has been more than a decade, was promoted to the main point of business all the way from the card's automotive beauty grass-roots business manager, reached a rate of performance and management of staff, paid a considerable amount of effort, this time to get my experience along with salary increase in the accumulated, let me leave that add to the dismay into the corporate apparel industry in high forest, although previous work different, but the required business experience is still the same, nearly three years of experience accumulated, so I understand need 隔行如隔山 to pay quite a lot of effort to maintain my ambition and fighting power to consider the work of the weekly rest is relatively stable, and resolutely to leave and enter the now still

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