請各位幫我看英文自介 - 職場

Oscar avatar
By Oscar
at 2012-03-11T02:13

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煩請各位幫我看一下英文自介
大概是兩分鐘的基本介紹
可能寫的非常不好,許多文法和單字都不清楚使用的是否得當
麻煩各位幫我看一下
非常感謝各位指教,謝謝

My name is XXX.I graduated from XXX university and my major was Russian .

In college period,I was a once the cheif of document and file in student
association of our department.In charge to categorize documents and publish
department's periodical.In addition,I have joined in the department's
contestsand performance.In my learning,I received semester scholarship from
university.

Because my parents have to run a restaurant,when I was in the university,
I was part time job in my family's business.I had to do waitress,accounting
assistant,that I learned the basic accounting affirs , how to communicate
with people and know organization ethics.

My perfessional job experience is necessarily limited,but I am sure that I
will be earnset in my work and be actively solve problems.

The above is my self-introduction. I wish to be granted an opportunity to
join yours. Thank you.


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Dorothy avatar
By Dorothy
at 2012-03-14T00:20
看不懂,錯字連篇,文法也很怪 通篇幾乎都是III
Tristan Cohan avatar
By Tristan Cohan
at 2012-03-14T03:34
同意樓上..請重新檢視文法
Megan avatar
By Megan
at 2012-03-17T01:38
謝謝你們的建議,我會在重新修改:)
Delia avatar
By Delia
at 2012-03-20T04:02
I 服 U
Iris avatar
By Iris
at 2012-03-23T01:05
要速成就買英文自傳範例的書,拿來套用
Megan avatar
By Megan
at 2012-03-26T02:15
突然想到之前我花了好幾千塊請專業的幫忙改 結果改完我還
沒把升級版的自介貼到104上 就都錄取了 整個白忙一場@@
Jacky avatar
By Jacky
at 2012-03-26T11:04
政大俄語系? 哇咧沒問題
Madame avatar
By Madame
at 2012-03-30T08:39
完全OK。準備去上班吧

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