請教英文翻譯高手!幫我修飾我的自我介紹英文 - 面試

中文:
我的名字叫做xx，來自人文薈萃的新竹，畢業於xxxx會計實
務科，興趣是繪畫、寫作和計算，高中三年我努力將成績保持再
班上前三名。
國中時期計算曾是我最不拿手的科目，上了高中接
觸了會計這門學問，漸漸的計算方面的能力也越變越好，到了現
在計算已經變成我的興趣之ㄧ了!
高二我因為一部動畫而參加了網球社，看著裡面的人物揮灑的樣子，我也想親自體驗看看那種熱血沸騰的感覺。看動畫時我覺得那些好像都可以輕易做到，但是當我真正上場時發現很多不足之處，體力不夠、技巧不好...等等，
不過因為我發現了這些不足，才可以去改變它。在華麗的技巧背後一定是要很大的努力，所謂"台上十分鐘，台下十年功"，這是我參加網球社深深體會到的。 在未來我希望考到所有會計相關證照，有利以後會計師的道路，希望可以跟教授們一起學習，精進自己的會計能力。謝謝各位面試官。
英文:
My name is XX,I am from HsinChu , graduated fromXXXschool ,
hobby is drawing , writing and counting.In the three year I worked
hard keep the grade in the three numbers.
when in the junior school counted was very dufficult to me .
but I study hard ny count become better to better
from now on count become one of my interesting subject.
the second year, I took part in tennis club because of an animation,
Inside look at the way people sway,I would also like to personally
experience to see the kind of excited feeling ,Watch the movie when
I think that can be easily done, but When I actually played a lot of
deficiencies found,poor physical, skill not enough ...,but because I
found these deficiencies,can to change it.
The magnificent skills to must pay a high price,the so-called" ",
this is my deep experience to the tennis club.
In the future, I hope that through accounting certification exams,
after enabling the road Accountants,wish to study together with
Professor, enhancement their accounting capabilities.
Thank you for the interviewer.
我覺得文法很怪!希望大家幫我修飾一下!真的很謝謝!