PEˆs Quick Guide to Writing MBA Application - 工管

Weˆre down to the wire. Deadlines are coming at us every day, and weˆre
getting very close to the end of Round 2. Yet, despite the tight timelines,
many of you are just settling in to write your essays and bang out some
applications. And it is for you procrastinators of the world that Iˆm
writing this post.

For those of you that are just beginning your essays and need some direction,
some guidance, some magic to get your words on paper, take a moment and learn
a little something from the mistakes of PE clients past….

Weˆve been talking to clients all week, reading more essays than ever, and
we have come across an unusual challenge: A client writes about one list of
problems in their essay and then, in the conclusion, kinda goes his own way.
Loses track of the challenges he had set up.

Here is an example:

I set out to build a building in Shanghai.
- But I didnˆt speak the language in China
- And I didnˆt have enough start up capital
- And I failed! No building.

The next time I set out to build a building…
-I waited until the market got better.
-I delegated better.

What? What did this conclusion have to do with the mistakes you made last
time? What does a down market have to do with not speaking Mandarin? What
does delegation have to do with capital requirements? How does this situation
have anything to do with the last one? And going a step further, how does
this in any way show the adcom that youˆve learned from your mistakes and
can adapt and change for better outcomes?

It doesnˆt. And thatˆs a problem.

When youˆre writing these essays, you need to think through it all very
clearly. Donˆt just sit down and start writing. Make a plan. Make an
outline. Figure out what youˆre going to say before you write, and make sure
it makes sense, follows a very clear path and ends along the same lines as it
began.

When it comes to writing those essays, we like to tell our clients to think
about bowling. Yes, bowling. We tell them to ¨set ¯em up, and knock ¯em
down.〃 Keep your essays niiiiice and simple. If you set up three problems?
Knock ¯em right down. In the same order. Donˆt go off the reservation. Donˆ
t overthink it.

Like this:

I set out to build a building in Shanghai.
- But I didnˆ t speak the language in China
- And I didnˆt have enough start up capital
- And I failed! No building.

The next time I set out to build a building…
- I anticipated cultural challenges, and learned Chinese. BAM, 1st one fixed.
- I raised 20% more money than I needed. BAM. 2nd one fixed.

Set ¯em up, and knock ¯em down. Three up, three down. A, B, C teed up? Same
A, B, C retired. Three up, three down. And keep ¯em the same three. Thatˆs
how you write a strong and compelling application essay, no matter what
program youˆre targeting.

Yes, writing those essays is as easy as bowling. Maybe not as fun, but
definitely as simple. So come up with a plan, set up those challenges and
knock ¯em all down. You do that right, and those essays should write
themselves in no time.

Jon Frank
Founder PrecisionEssay
http://www.precisionessay.com

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