徵求英文高手協助我修改我的英文自傳感謝 - 工作

最近需要去面試，所以準備了英文的自傳。
但本身英文不是很好，所以想請教英文達人幫我修正一下。
I grew up in a single-parent families, families with three children, single-handedly brought by the mother. Because of the growth environment, and mother's education, the training of my independence, unyielding personality. From high school in order to reduce the burden of mother, began working outside to earn tuition, work experience taught me to face the crowd, the ability to get along with others, but also to develop a hard-working toughness. And optimistic, strong learning ability and curiosity is my personal qualities. Common interest is to look at literature, film and music, I like to immerse in the book with the picture in context, did not come into contact with and understand the world, develop their own inclusive and imagination. Like text, images, people brought the impact.
Universities in Hsinchu Chung Hua university Technology Management departments, participate in Department of Society, cheerleaders, basketball team, learning teamwork. In school performance scores in most accounting and financial, for the figure is more sensitive.
In a long career with themselves to have good performance, expectations can be perfect for each piece of work, working towards the goal of self-practice, there are more contributions to the company. I will use the spirit of one hundred percent chasing the dream, to play a good role in every workplace, fulfilling my duty. Willing to start from the grassroots accumulated experience and ability , to practice goal in life!
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大學時就讀位於新竹中華大學的科技管理系，參與系學會、系上拉拉隊、籃球隊，學習團隊合作與主辦活動的能力。在校成績以會計與經濟最為高分，對於數字與邏輯性較為靈敏。
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在漫長的職業生涯，要求自己能夠擁有良好的表現，對於每份工作期望可以盡善盡美，努力朝著實踐自我的目標前進，對公司有更多的貢獻。我將用百分之百的精神追逐夢想，來扮演好每一個職場角色，善盡我的本分。願意從基層做起累積自己的經驗與實力，一步一腳印去實踐人生目標！