想請大大們幫我看看中翻英的文法和內容是否通順和正確 - 工作

By Regina
at 2009-12-16T00:00

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想請大大們幫我看看中翻英的文法和內容是否通順和正確~
P.S 這是要用來應徵美語老師的口頭介紹，麻煩了

你好，我叫xxx，今年29歲，很高興有這個機會來面試這份工作，我之前所從事的工作都是屬於客服、助理、行政方面的工作，而美語教師這份工作，對我來說很新鮮也很有挑戰性。
我覺得要成為一個好的美語老師有三個基本條件~
1. 要有耐心~因為幼稚園有3-6歲小朋友，都是很活潑的。
2. 老師本身的英文發音和咬字都要清楚。
3. 要有足夠的親和力。
基於我目前是就讀應用英文系，而且我也很喜歡跟小孩子玩，希望能把我所學到的知識，來運用在美語的
教學工作上。不過，對於這份工作來說，我還有許多地方需要磨練和學習，我有信心很快就能掌握並熟悉
我職務上的責任。謝謝!
HI~there, my name is Joanna , I am 29 years old. It's my pleasure and opportunity to interview this job . As an assistant and costomer service are what I am engaged in. And to be an english teacher is very interesting and attractive to me . I think that to be a good english teaher aleast has three skills..
1. Be patient with kids.
2. Good pronunciation.
3. You must be nice to kids.
Besides I am studying on English and I like to play with kids. I have confidence to hadle it and try my best to do this job. Thank for your listening.

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By Daniel
at 2009-12-17T13:22

HI~there, (面試是很重要正式的場合﹐不要用 Hi, there, 這是一種與朋友或比較輕鬆的招呼語﹐不太適合在工作面試時使用, Hello/Good morning (afternoon, evening))
my (My) name is Joanna , I am 29 years old. It's my pleasure and opportunity to interview this job . (to interview 變成你是給予面試的人, 應該是 to be here for the interview. It's my pleasure to be here for the interview today.) As an assistant and costomer service are (were) what I am (used to be ) engaged in. And to be an english (English ) teacher is very interesting and attractive to me . I think that to be a good english (English) teaher aleast (at least ) has three skills..
I think 通常有比較不確定的意思﹐我個人覺得在面試中﹐你需要表現出你確定及有自信﹐所以用 I believe 會比較好)
1. Be patient with kids.
2. Good pronunciation.
3. You must be nice to kids.
Besides (In addition ,) I am studying on (這裡不需要介系詞) English and I like to play with kids. I have confidence to hadle it and (I will) try my best to do this job. Thank (不是 thanks 就是 thank you) for your listening.
Hello, my name is XXX. I am 29 years old. It'smy pleasure to be here today and thank you for the invitation and opportunity. In the past, I used to work as an assistant and I had experiences in customer service and administrative works. To me, English teacher is an interesting job with great challenges. I am always higly interested in the job.
In my opinion, I believe that there are 3 basic requirements for being a good English teacher:
1. Be patient with kids
2. Good pronunciation
3. Must be nice to kids
Since I am majoring in "Applied English" and I always like children; therefore, I hope that I can contribute myself to the teaching job with what I study and my knowledge. However, there are still a lot of things that I have to practice and learn regarding to the position. I will surely try my best to learn and be profession with my responsibilities. I have confidence that I can be familiar with the job and handle it well since I am a quick learner.
Once again, thank you for the opportunity and I am ready for the questions if there are any.
2009-12-16 22:06:41 補充：
不好意思﹐你的文法有些小錯誤﹐還有﹐我覺得你有很多句子是以中文來思考﹐也就是比較中文式的英文﹐那也可能是造成你文法上錯誤的原因之一。因此﹐我就重新依據你的原文﹐做一個重新的修改。還有﹐給你一個建議﹐要當一個英文老師﹐我覺得你還必須加強你的文法概念﹐而且﹐ 你的拼字及大/小寫要注意。
除了對小孩子好及要有耐心外﹐英文老師需要的是更多﹐特別是如果你要教幼兒或兒童美語。我覺得你所列的3點只是最基本的﹐而且這些條件是其他許多行業也比備的,例如﹐幼稚園/安親班/小學/才藝老師等.所以你應該要有更多比其他應徵者更好的理由來說服面試你的人。你可能要再想想一些比這3 點更有力的理由來說服別人僱用你。
2009-12-16 22:06:55 補充：
最重要的﹐我真的覺得你的英文文法概念還不夠。你可能需要再進修及加強這方面的能力。因為在教學上﹐你很可能要面對的不只是你的小朋友﹐有時碰到學校老師或家長的問題﹐甚至其他同事的問題時﹐你需要表現出你的專業知識。
當然我們都不是以英文為母語的人﹐一定都還有不懂的。我覺得你或許真的對這份工作有很大的熱誠﹐但你或許需要再考慮及分析各方面。
2009-12-16 22:07:03 補充：
ESL是我大學時的副修,我自己也是很多年的英文老師﹐我並不是要在此炫耀或說我很厲害﹐但我只是想告訴你﹐英文老師的工作並不是那麼容易﹐而且也不像一般人看起來那樣的輕鬆。除了一般的上課﹐課堂外所要花的時間可是很多的。而且﹐出了教學﹐還要有能力準備活動﹐編劇﹐排演﹐懂得小孩心理學﹐如何控制課堂秩序等等。最重要的是你的英文專業知識。
這只是我個人小小的經驗分享與看法罷了。沒有任何冒犯的意思。
加油。還是祝你好運!!

By Rebecca
at 2009-12-19T09:57

錯!錯!錯!很多地方都錯!

想請大大們幫我看看中翻英的文法和內容是否通順和正確 - 工作

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