新鮮人英文自傳求批... - 職場

David avatar
By David
at 2017-02-12T04:17

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背景:私立大學企管 多益僅790
該篇自傳想附在人力銀行的英文自傳內
或是該改為pdf檔放在附件呢

希望能找到外商的缺,或是國內公司的國外業務...但同時也不反對一些貿易類其他職位

因此傾向大方向的介紹自己沒有針對明確產業別,不知道是否正確,文章就靠僅有的英文
能力還有字典拼湊出來,還想麻煩板上前輩不吝指正了十分感謝

My name is xxx and I am a business graduate from YYY University, Department of
Business Management. In my college, I specially interest in aspect of Marketi
ng and Human Resource. I believe that my academic background and social skill
make me as a strong entry level candidate for the job.

Family & Personality
I have a lovely family. My father is an owner of mobile store. Whenever I am f
ree, I really like to interact with customers, and learn how to react with dif
ferent client even foreigner. Every time customer leave, I would review the ca
se to understand how can I do much better in next time. That create so many op
portunities for me to verify and to modify my concept and attitude on work. I
think I am not only an outgoing person but positive and considerate.

Leadership Experience & Interest
I am a really enthusiast about sports. I play basketball, baseball and softbal
l, also join dancing club in my high school and college. In my club, I usually
play a leader or planner part. From recruiting new members, planning a show o
f the year and holding the 3 days training camp. I should totally understand t
he detail of case and make sure it would be hold successful.

Work Experience
I do a part-time job in my first year of college at Pakistan restaurant.
In there. I learn how to get along with colleague from different country such
as India, Vietnam and Pakistan. In my third year, I find a HR intern vacancy a
t one listed company. The company called ‘’Dimerco’’ in Logistic industry.
The job description is “Assisting manager to formulate report with word or e
xcel” and “Making the data turn into the information”. That makes me improv
e my ability of thinking comprehensively.
Last year, I go to TGI Friday’s restaurant to learn their FSS (Friday's servi
ce style).
Both in theory and practice. I get award of top 10 of a year, top sales and be
st rookies from TGI Friday’s, and also get the qualification of bartender.
In there, I learn how to serve 5 or 6 tables efficiently in the same time. So
I am good at prioritize, and I can always make right decision immediately.

In summary
I can always face challenges in positive attitude, and I like to find somewhe
re I don’t read or study before. To be a fresh graduate, I have infinite pass
ion and energy. I hope I can get in the best company and create my own value i
n there.

I would appreciate an opportunity to discuss my qualifications at your earlies
t convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration.

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All Comments

Madame avatar
By Madame
at 2017-02-12T15:47
你有google網路上的範本嗎 讀起來很瑣碎 建議列點
Madame avatar
By Madame
at 2017-02-13T18:06
你打個cv resume都有不少可以參考的
Callum avatar
By Callum
at 2017-02-15T23:22
234段列點 最後一段刪掉
Emily avatar
By Emily
at 2017-02-17T09:14
Leadership Experience 不夠能表現出你都領導能力和
如何找到新工作,新工作內容太模糊,你離職的原因,工
作要分年月來表示,格式要清礎,重點要抓住在改改就
很好了,加油
Callum avatar
By Callum
at 2017-02-17T11:30
實利,這段可拿除,工作經驗最重要卻不夠豐富,例如,
Mason avatar
By Mason
at 2017-02-17T14:27
第一段就怪了,想做的是國外業務類
Isla avatar
By Isla
at 2017-02-22T11:42
自傳說對HR有興趣,所以你只是想投投看?
Zanna avatar
By Zanna
at 2017-02-26T21:26
滿多文法錯誤的…
Odelette avatar
By Odelette
at 2017-02-27T04:12
可以用grammarly幫你找錯誤
Liam avatar
By Liam
at 2017-03-02T00:07
然後你寫的英文是中式英文
Sandy avatar
By Sandy
at 2017-03-06T17:36
寫成這樣不如不要寫
Charlotte avatar
By Charlotte
at 2017-03-11T11:33
In my college, I specially interest in 是什麼鬼
Charlie avatar
By Charlie
at 2017-03-12T05:58
哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈
Wallis avatar
By Wallis
at 2017-03-17T04:52
太長,三段即可,第一段簡單自介,第二節寫大學、研究
Isla avatar
By Isla
at 2017-03-19T16:17
所學到或做過的事,第三段寫為什麼想要這個工作。
剩下的都是文法錯誤
Oliver avatar
By Oliver
at 2017-03-23T09:21
寫作跟口語不一樣,如果這是你口語的自介是可以(文體,文
法還需修改),寫作的話結構不夠嚴謹。
Jacob avatar
By Jacob
at 2017-03-24T17:41
很明顯抄了範本還寫成這樣
Isla avatar
By Isla
at 2017-03-28T12:43
為什麼多益790 寫的比我還可怕
Doris avatar
By Doris
at 2017-03-29T15:05
Last year, I "go" to...
Candice avatar
By Candice
at 2017-04-02T04:42
想要酸人的就不用推文了吧
Tracy avatar
By Tracy
at 2017-04-03T02:41
家庭背景直接刪掉好嗎? 寫這個就是菜菜子才會做的事
Jacky avatar
By Jacky
at 2017-04-05T15:02
很多文法錯誤...
Emily avatar
By Emily
at 2017-04-09T23:01
不建議用grammarly, 找native speaker幫你修最好
Caroline avatar
By Caroline
at 2017-04-14T04:39
你第一段就文法錯得很多,之後就沒看
Olive avatar
By Olive
at 2017-04-14T06:23
多益790 文章寫成這樣不如不寫@@
Delia avatar
By Delia
at 2017-04-19T04:33
這樣有790....
Kristin avatar
By Kristin
at 2017-04-22T21:16
畢業那邊寫錯了應該是我畢業於XXX從XXX大學
William avatar
By William
at 2017-04-23T01:34
如果不確定寫法正確 我建議你先GOOGLE 我都這樣
Iris avatar
By Iris
at 2017-04-25T21:51
我因為第一段很矛盾後面就沒看
Joe avatar
By Joe
at 2017-04-26T20:34
真的可以google有英文網站有針對不同職務寫的範例CV與履
Irma avatar
By Irma
at 2017-05-01T14:21
中文看去沒料的、英文的就甭看了
Wallis avatar
By Wallis
at 2017-05-03T14:18
印象深刻,某公司自傳題目:四個英文單詞形容自己。
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