煩請高手幫我檢查我英文文章翻譯的正不正確--2 - 工作
By Wallis
at 2012-12-03T00:00
at 2012-12-03T00:00
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What’s more, these devices make it easier for clinicians to create their own interruptions. With the smartphone or other mobile device in their hands—and with Internet access or communication channels just a click or tap away—clinicians can easily succumb to the temptation to conduct personal business during patient care. For instance, half of the respondents to a 2010 survey of perfusionists acknowledged texting during heart-lung bypass procedures, with 15% further acknowledging that they accessed the Internet and 3% reporting that they visited social networking sites during procedures (Smith et al. 2011). Additional instances of digital distractions cited in a December 2011 New York Times article include a nurse checking airfares during surgery and a neurosurgeon using a wireless headset to make personal calls during surgery. In the latter case, the lawyer for a patient who was left partly paralyzed contends that cell phone use distracted the neurosurgeon during the procedure. The case was settled before the formal fi ling of a lawsuit (Richtel 2011).
更重要的事,這些裝置使醫生容自己容易受到干擾,隨著智慧型手機或其它行動裝置在自己手上----網路存取或溝通管道只需按一下或輕敲一下----醫生在病人照顧期間很容易受到誘惑去從事私人工作。例如,2010年對灌流師的調查顯示,一半的受訪者在心肺繞道手術中傳簡訊,有15%的人進一步承認使用網路,有3%報導指出他們在手術期間上社群網站(Smith et al.2011)。在2011年12月紐約時報的一篇文章引述數位娛樂的其它實例包括一名護士在手術期間核對機票且一名神經外科醫生在手術期間使用無線耳機打私人電話。在最近的案例,一名部分癱瘓病人的律師堅稱在手術期間手機的使用分散了神經外科醫生的注意力。此案件在訴訟正式提起前和解(Richtel 2011)。
更重要的事,這些裝置使醫生容自己容易受到干擾,隨著智慧型手機或其它行動裝置在自己手上----網路存取或溝通管道只需按一下或輕敲一下----醫生在病人照顧期間很容易受到誘惑去從事私人工作。例如,2010年對灌流師的調查顯示,一半的受訪者在心肺繞道手術中傳簡訊,有15%的人進一步承認使用網路,有3%報導指出他們在手術期間上社群網站(Smith et al.2011)。在2011年12月紐約時報的一篇文章引述數位娛樂的其它實例包括一名護士在手術期間核對機票且一名神經外科醫生在手術期間使用無線耳機打私人電話。在最近的案例,一名部分癱瘓病人的律師堅稱在手術期間手機的使用分散了神經外科醫生的注意力。此案件在訴訟正式提起前和解(Richtel 2011)。
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By Liam
at 2012-12-05T08:00
at 2012-12-05T08:00
What’s more important, these devices make it easier for clinicians easier to create their own be interrupted by themselves. With the smartphones or other mobile devices in their hands—and with accessing to the Internet access or communication channels just need a click or a tap away—clinicians can easily succumb to the temptation to conduct personal business during a patient caring. For instance, half of the respondents to a the 2010 survey of to perfusionists acknowledged that they had been texting during heart-lung bypass procedures, with 15% further acknowledged that they accessed was surfing in the Internet and 3% reported that they was visiting social networking websites during the procedures (Smith et al. 2011). Additional instances of digital distractions cited in a December 2011 New York Times article which including a nurse had been checking airfares during a surgery and a neurosurgeon had been using a wireless headset to make personal calls during a surgery. In the latter case, the lawyer for a of the patient who was left partly paralyzed contended that cell phone using distracted the neurosurgeon during in the procedure. But the case was settled before the formally filing of a lawsuit (Richtel 2011).
2012-12-03 23:57:51 補充:
是英文譯成中文嗎?我做錯方向?
2012-12-04 12:27:37 補充:
中文修正如下:
更值得一提的是,這些裝置使臨床醫生們更容易經由他們手上的智慧型手機或其它行動裝置自我製造干擾----而由於上網或通訊只需按一下或輕敲一下----臨床醫生很容易在病人照顧期間受到誘惑,而去辦理私人事務。
例如,一項2010年對灌流師的調查顯示,一半的受訪者承認在心肺繞道手術中傳送簡訊,有15%的人進一步承認使用網路,而3%則指出他們在手術程序進行期間登上社群網站(Smith et al.2011)。
2012-12-04 12:28:43 補充:
中文修正第3段:
在紐約時報的一篇2011年12月的文章引述另數則數位干擾的案例,其中包括一名護士在手術期間查詢機票費用,而一名神經外科醫生在手術期間使用頭戴式的無線耳機講私人電話。在前述後一項案例,一名因而成為部分癱瘓的病人的律師聲稱在手術期間使用手機分散了該神經外科醫生的注意力。此案件已在訴訟正式提起前和解(Richtel 2011)。
By Rosalind
at 2012-12-03T06:28
at 2012-12-03T06:28
很抱歉我沒說清楚
是英文翻譯成中文
如果可以的話再煩請你看看我的中文翻譯通不通順
非常感謝
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