英文自傳幫忙修改 - 工作

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我的名字是XXX,我的朋友都叫我XX,公司如果有需要我願意花2倍時間工作,希望帶給公司更多的貢獻,我想在未來繼續增長,成為公司的主要,謝謝指教
My name is XXX, my friends call me XX, if you need twice as much time, I am willing to work, hoping to bring more contributions, I would like to continue to grow in the future, become the company's main, thank you enlighten
這樣翻對嗎???
Update:
設備工程師
Update 2:
感謝TOMING88大大幫忙修正,還有其他人願意分享如何修改嗎??
Update 3:
謝謝大家的幫忙^^,請問這樣面是英文自傳會太少內容嗎???
Update 4:
打錯字了面試

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Rosalind avatarRosalind2014-05-31
我叫XXX,我的朋友都叫我XX,如果你需要兩倍的時間,我很願意工作,希望能帶來更多的貢獻,我想在未來繼續增長,成為公司的主力,謝謝賜教
2014-05-31 16:22:19 補充:
我叫XXX[和]我的朋友[只會]叫我XX。我願意,只要在需要時工作,作為兩次我的正常工作時間,從而帶來對公司做出更多的貢獻。] [我想看看自己與公司的未來增長,而]變成[該公司首席設備工程師。太謝謝你了。]
2014-05-31 16:59:40 補充:
My name is XXX, my friends call me XX, the company if there is a need to spend twice the time I am willing to work, hoping to bring more contributions to the company, I want to continue to grow in the future, become the company's main, thank you enlighten
Skylar Davis avatarSkylar Davis2014-06-03
My name is XXX [and] my friends [would simply] call me XX[. I am willing to work as long as twice my normal working hours whenever required, so as to bring in more contributions to the company.] [I would like to see myself grow with the company in the future, and] become [the company's chief equipment engineer. Thank you so much.]
Linda avatarLinda2014-06-02
The Autobiography:-
My name is XXX,my friends call me XX.
If you need twice as much time-rate as in quantity demanded, I am willing to do that twice over.hoping to bring more contributions to the Co..
I would like to contribute to grow and being promoted in the future. and become the Co.'s Chief Equipment Engineer.
Thanks for your enlightenment and understanding.
Barb Cronin avatarBarb Cronin2014-06-03
公司的主要 ==> 這個職務中文全名是什麼?