英文自傳求批 - offer

各位小底小咩妳好
小阿姨今年三二欲求餐飲業的全職或兼職工作
對英文很沒有自信
太弱了都沒用
在此請求小底小美眉批改

感激在先!




: My background is the functioning of government and Law
: which helps raising the living standard of the civil
: public and also advance the efficiency of public administration.
My major is public administration and law which is related to
the function of government and the relations of citizens.
: Besides, I read western literature for example Greek mythology
: and English masterpieces from taking the major classes of English
: literature department and also hit high scores in the exams.
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: In conclusion, combined with law, language and the view of
Therefore,...
: international affairs, I believe that there is an opportunity
: for adding values from being one of your members
: in the corporation.


: Moreover, having the working experience of serving the foreign
: clients also helps me accelerate the understanding of west market
: and realize that the ability of independence and being professional
: are the two bases when it comes to an account manager. As a result,
Moreover, according to the 4 years solid experiences of serving the
international customers, I devote myself to cultivate the ability of
coordinaiton between defferent benefits convey.
: with the advantage of English skills and the enthusiasm of serving
: the customers, I turn to restaurant and develop the know-how of
: offering the food and beverage services. Hope to have your appreciation
: and thanks for your browsing.
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有不通順的地方還請擔心!

已大修，餐飲有多益比較好找，請批，謝謝!
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勇者，在牙醫檯上一個也沒有!


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