英文自我介紹應徵工作用請大大幫忙 - 工作

非常感謝您今天在百忙之中,抽空出來讓我能有這個面試的機會.
我在家裏排行是老大,為了分擔父母辛勞,從20歲開始便一面工作一面求學.
我曾在電子公司內擔任業務助理工作,主要擔任對日的聯絡,從接訂單到交貨期間發生的事項幾乎都需和相關人員一起進行處理,也曾是日本交流協會的短期約雇員,擔任工作有在台日商的進出調查及去年剛開始實施的台日渡假打工制度相關事務協助等等.
正因為有這些經驗,所以了解到自己的能力不僅是獨立完成的作業,即使是團體工作也可以和大家在互相幫忙的情況下完成.
這次,看見貴公司徵求業務助理一職,雖然銷售的商品與我先前的公司有極大的不同,但我想信憑著努力及先前的經驗,一定可以比別人更快進入狀況.
希望貴公司能給我一個機會. 謝謝
Thank you for today's busy schedule, taking time out so that I can have this interview opportunity.
Ranking is the leader in my home, in order to share the hard work their parents, from the 20-year-old school side of the start side of the work.
I have the electronic assistant to work within the company as a business, mainly as a liaison to Japan, from order to delivery took place during the next issues and almost all need to be handled with the relevant personnel, also in Japan Interchange Association about the short-term employees, as work entry and exit of Japanese companies in Taiwan last year, the beginning of the investigation and the implementation of the Taiwan-Japan working holiday system in matters related to assistance and so on.
It is precisely because of these experiences, it is not only aware of their ability to work independently, even in group work and everyone can help each other to complete the case.
This time, to see your company to seek the post of assistant business, although sales of goods and my previous company has greatly different, but I do not believe relying on the efforts and previous experience, will be able to more quickly than others into the situation.
Hope that your company can give me a chance. Thank you,
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