請各位幫我看英文自介 - 職場

※ 引述《matchacat (抹茶很好吃)》之銘言：
: 煩請各位幫我看一下英文自介
: 大概是兩分鐘的基本介紹
: 可能寫的非常不好,許多文法和單字都不清楚使用的是否得當
: 麻煩各位幫我看一下
: 非常感謝各位指教,謝謝
:
我假設你是要用說的表達

My name is XXX.I majored in Russian at XXX University.

: Back in college I was (the cheif of document and file in student
: association of our department)系學會文書?用法妳再查查.
In charge of categorizing documents and editing periodical of the department.
I have also joined the department's contestsand(沒看過這單字)
performance.


I got scholarship from the University.(獎學金部分要補充講清楚一點 我想對方會
有興趣, 然後找一個"正確"的位子安插到自我介紹裡)


I would especially like to draw your attention to my Xmonth part-time
experience in my family's business(restaurant) as a waitress and
accounting assistant. Through this experience I have learned
basic accounting skills, organization ethics and how to communicate with
people fluently. I am pretty confident that I can build and maintain
productive relationships with clients and colleagues at your company.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

簡單改是這樣 看最後一段能不能多加一些支持的例子證明你有
high level of communication, interpersonal and interpretive skills.

如果能找俄文相關我想自我介紹可以放重在俄文

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