英文履歷求指點 - 面試

個人學經歷背景：
國立大學研所肄業
欲應徵之職務：
國外業務
自傳履歷內容：

各位前輩們好 我是一名女性 有點資深了 年紀34歲 有工作經驗8年了
以前的工作主要是國外業務人員 累積有4年半經歷
最近正在找工作 卻投了198封履歷 卻沒有任何公司面試機會
希望可以看出哪邊有問題?
請各位前輩不另指教 給予指點 謝謝！
以下為敝人的英文自傳：（不能透露的就以AAA表示）

My name is AAA who graduates from National AAA University with the major in
AAA Administration which is related to public management, law and politics.
When I was a graduate of college, I was interested in law; therefore, I
passed the entrance exam to be a graduate school student whose major is AAA
law. However after a period of time, I chose to pursue the working career.


When I stepped forward to the society, I became the international trader at
AAA Corp. whose product was medical equipment.
At that time, I learned a lot from my colleagues about building the essential
working attitudes and cultivating basic skills.
I dealt with the shipping documents for making the product's delivery more
efficient and more smooth.


With the first job's base, I turned to AAA Technology to work as an
international sales specialist for selling the cameras to Europe.
I had been to England, France, Germany, Belgium, Ireland, and the Netherlands
on my own with business trips from which I got big deals and great fruitful
business developments for our company.


Afterwards, I made a decision to transfer my job to a traditional company
whose field is knitting cap and whose customer is Nike.
I supervised all the sales sample, proto, production sample and bulk for
their production processes.


Then I change to work as a waitress at the Chinese Cuisine Restaurant, AAA
Kitchen around two years. I learned how to fulfill every consumer's needs.


The recent jobs are :
(1)International trader at AAA Corp.(Chemical Co.)
To make the shipping processes and book the cargo space.
(2)Operator at AAA Hotel.(5-star Hotel)
To put through the phone calls directly to the exact department and the room
guests and also get the know-how about the Opera system for keying in the
booking info.

I believe that I can do my best for your company and make mutual progresses
for your business.



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