英文自傳待批 - offer

※ 引述《junkos (醬克斯)》之銘言：
: 主要想請問應徵media planner這個職位還需要在文章裡強調哪些特質呢？
: 麻煩板上先進幫忙指點迷津，謝謝！
: Born and raised in a middle class family, I have always been told to be
: hardworking and responsible for what I chose to do as I want. This is the
: very principle of my life and does contribute a lot to my education and
: part-time job experience. In addition to the serious and efficient attitude
: toward official events, yet I still perceive a quite flexible and amiable
: lifestyle in private as those who have got along with me may describe my
: personality.
: Graduated in NCCU, department of sociology, I have been trained to be
: passionately curious about people around us, and dedicated to solving
: problems. Because of many team works and the experience of executing two
: quantitative research projects and one qualitative documentary, I am equipped
: with a very keen sense to statistical numbers and great interpersonal skills,
: team spirits, and excellent communication ability.
: Also, contacting with people is to me a really interesting matter and leads
: me to become a waiter of table service for three years. In the substantial
: and highly intensive three-year work experience, I have become very good at
: dealing with customers' problem and good at coping with a great deal of
: pressure.
: Due to my personal backgrounds and characteristics, I feel that the position
: offered would be ideal in giving me the opportunity to use my education and
: skills to serve as a media planner for this enterprise with high prestige in
: its own field. I sincerely look forward to hearing from you.

Overall, I'm not sure if you are aware of "madia planning" enough. Concerning
your work experiences, it makes you a better team wokrer. However, you need to
realize a market planner needs to a)analyze client's target markets, b)meet
client's needs, c)to be, at least, intersted in every medium that an ad might
apply for.
Based on your autobiography, I see you are good at dealing with statistics.
That's good. I suggest you explain it a bit more; so as to let your boss know
you will be able to apply this key skills into works. Other than this, I don't
think you show other characteristics that fits media planner.
So, I strongly suggest you rewrite it. First, your work experiences. And then,
explains why it matters with the job your applying for.

It's my view. Not guarantee you it's exactly what your boss is looking for.

Good Luck.

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