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Good morning, my dear Professors. I am very glad to be here for your interview.
I am ---, 19 years old .I come from Yunlin,Taiwan, a wonderful city of great weather.
My undergraduate program was accomplished in Mingzhi University in June, 2009;
and now, I am trying my best to Matriculation to National Tsing Hua University of technology .
Generally speaking, I am a hard working student especially in doing things Aspect.
I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is going to be.
I think should do any matter immediately is very important,
so I understood that grasps the time.
Therefore for four year my schoolwork aspect I all maintain at first two
When I have the sufficient specialized knowledge, and in third-grade level time the school arranges our entering to work
When I tried to Development my ability the first time, I felt pretty hard,
because there is bountiful information on my mind and Is actually unable to let it according to make my plan
But I go by the earnest manner diligently.
After one year of work, I managed to promoted own experience , everybody acknowledges my specialized ability
Well, in my spare time, I like to play music, reading magazine and play basketball.
Also English is my favorite. I often Talks with the foreigner to practice my oral , and write articles to improve my ability . I know my English
Can also be better, so I will keep studying it.
Ok, that is all, thank you for your attention.
早上好，我親愛的教授。我很高興在這裡您接受面試。
我---，19歲。我來自雲林，台灣，美好的城市的好天氣。
我的計劃是在2009年6月畢業於明志科技大學;
現在，我盡我所能為了入讀國立清華大學。
一般來說，我是一個辛勤工作的學生，特別是在做事方面。
我會盡我的最大努力完成它，不管將是多麼困難。
我認為做任何事情，立即是非常重要的，
所以我理解，把握時間。
因此，我四年學業方面我都保持前兩名
當我有足夠的專業知識，並在三年級時學校安排我們工讀
當我試圖發展自己的能力的第一次，我感到相當困難，
因為當有豐富的信息在我的主意，實際上不能夠讓它按照我的計劃做
但我確實的努力後。
經過一年的工作，我設法提升自己的經驗，大家都公認，我的專業能力
那麼，在我的業餘時間，我喜歡聽音樂，閱讀雜誌和打籃球。
同時英文是我所最喜歡的。我經常與外國人會談實踐我的口頭，並寫文章，提高自己的能力。我知道我的英語
還可以更好，所以我會繼續學習它。
好了，這是所有，謝謝您的關注。
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