應屆畢業生英文自傳求批 - 履歷

各位大大們好，這是小妹第一次求批英文自傳，相信它仍有很大的修改空間，

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謝謝大家的耐心和願意幫助我的善心

個人學經歷背景： 國立大學財務金融研究所

欲應徵之職務： 儲備幹部

自傳履歷內容：

Extends the deep respect to your industrious work, even you are very busy.
Thanks to glance through my material. And hoped that it can open an
opportunity and the success gate for me.

My name is ooxx, Betty is my English name. I do a Master’s. degree
in finance at National oo University and research on Fixed-Income
security. The topic of my paper is ‘Information uncertainty and corporation
bonds’ liquidity’. I choose to research fixed-income because its low
volatility and it can take stable income. I believe that it will be helpful
not only for my work in the future but my financial planning.

I learned to be independent and helped to take care of my younger brother
when I was a child. It makes me become a thoughtful, reliable, and
down-to-earth person. That’s why I always be the leader in many groups. In
2010, I entered a contest which named World Economic Outlook Essay
Competition with my friends. We had to organize three English papers and an
English article in three hours, then presented them to judges. I used topics
and abstracts of those paper to know the contest and let my teammates connect
to the article. We spent two hours to organize them, and different from other
teams we have more time to do analysis. We not only presented the information
of those material but elaborate our conclusions. Then we got a silver medal.

During the institute, because of classmates’ reliance and professors’
recognition I continue to hold the leader of the class when reelected, even
been picked for assistant of EMBA program to solve all of those students’
problems. Of all assistant, they most favorite me. Whenever they need help,
thy always find me to help deal. I'm not just an assistant, but their
secretary.

I also be administrative assistant in department of finance general office.
Due to strong sense of responsibility, I don’t just finish my job, every
time they have many works to do, I’m always ready to help to relieve their
heavy workload. They tell me that I’m the most proactive assistant. For this
reason I’ve worked here more than one year.

Volleyball’s group mentality is the reason that I'm fanatic about this
sport. Fighting with teammates and sharing the honor to each other are
wonderful things for me. In college, I’ve been an event planner for annually
beach volleyball activity many times. When I had different thinking from
others, I tried to stand in others’ shoes and ask seniors for suggestions in
order to solve the problem and make the following work be carried on
smoothly.

With my great specialized knowledge of finance and highly proactive, I am
confident that I will fit management associate. It's been said, ‘Where there
’s a will, there’s the way!’ I believe that pressure can make me grow up,
so I’m not afraid of meeting challenge. OOO Financial Holdings
gives good opportunity and a series of well-designed training sessions to
make freshmen become an excellent MA. Wish you can give me a chance to prove
it. I am eager to be one of the programmers and I will pay attention to your
firm's development as always, and express my sincerest wish.

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