新鮮人英文自傳求批 - 履歷

George avatar
By George
at 2015-04-07T19:35

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大大們好,小妹是今年應屆畢業生,就讀運輸相關科系,有學過些與海運相關的課程,希望能報考長榮海運的國際貨櫃運輸管理人員一職。
由於線上履歷系統有限1500字元,希望各位大大能幫忙提供些意見,以便修改完善,非常感謝!
(手機排版,敬請見諒)

Dear Sir or Madam,
My major is transportation, which learned Marine Transportation, Tramp Shipping and logistics. Although I’m introverted and not used to the social place, I always keep active attitude to do my best and through club activities, part-time job and studying abroad to improve myself.

I’ve participated in voluntary club, English speech club and Guitar Club in university. Through them, I learned how to get along with others and developed the spirit of team work and the ability of turning ideas to act.

Moreover, I also have the experiences of part-time job, for example, I used free time to work on campus, be a professor’s assistant, and serve a receptionist of clinic. These experiences develop my patience, tolerance, capability of overcoming adversity and communication skills.

Due to desiring to expand horizon and improve English ability, in the final year of university, I went to Canada to be an exchange student. Through the opportunity, In addition to learning professional knowledge, it enriched me by communicating with others, experiencing diverse cultures and training the independent thinking.

Because I’m interested in marine transportation and container shipping, it is my dream to work in Evergreen Marine. Therefore, if I would be fortunately a member of your company, I will work hard in return. So, I hope to have the pleasure to obtain the interview.

感謝大大們耐心看完,謝謝!


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Rebecca avatar
By Rebecca
at 2015-04-11T16:12
一看就知是中式英文喔 找個身邊英文強的朋友重寫 加油:)
Freda avatar
By Freda
at 2015-04-14T18:32
有些很明顯的英文文法錯誤,長榮既然要求英文履歷,建
Tom avatar
By Tom
at 2015-04-15T12:46
好好改一下文法
Hardy avatar
By Hardy
at 2015-04-20T02:56
另外看完後感覺沒有什麼重點,不會讓人第一眼就印象深
Tracy avatar
By Tracy
at 2015-04-24T07:22
刻,建議你把對方吸引你的原因寫出來,還有你能為他們
Kyle avatar
By Kyle
at 2015-04-27T16:35
貢獻什麼
Charlotte avatar
By Charlotte
at 2015-04-28T11:18
光看前2段就很標準的中式英文,如果人家對英文有要求,最好找
專業人士潤稿...
Todd Johnson avatar
By Todd Johnson
at 2015-05-01T05:07
看第一句就知道不行了
Joseph avatar
By Joseph
at 2015-05-06T03:03
第一段至少有三個文法錯誤 先請人把文法問題都改正吧
Queena avatar
By Queena
at 2015-05-07T04:53
切記 一個句子只能用一個動詞
Joseph avatar
By Joseph
at 2015-05-10T09:44
好慘...
Adele avatar
By Adele
at 2015-05-15T02:59
語感沒有建立出來,修改一下敘事方式,讓重點可以突
顯出來
Dora avatar
By Dora
at 2015-05-15T04:21
你在寫什麼啊...
Edward Lewis avatar
By Edward Lewis
at 2015-05-15T20:21
1上網查查 cover letter 怎寫
Hedy avatar
By Hedy
at 2015-05-19T06:26
句法改一下應該就可以,第一次寫這樣很OK了,別灰心
Eartha avatar
By Eartha
at 2015-05-22T05:47
找人潤稿 這....中式英文喔
Lucy avatar
By Lucy
at 2015-05-23T16:01
X謝謝各位大大的建議與指教,會再好好修改的,謝謝!
Doris avatar
By Doris
at 2015-05-24T18:59
這不如不要寫還比較好。隨便附個
Zora avatar
By Zora
at 2015-05-26T14:20
多益分數搞不好還能唬到人

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