大大們好，小妹是今年應屆畢業生，就讀運輸相關科系，有學過些與海運相關的課程，希望能報考長榮海運的國際貨櫃運輸管理人員一職。
由於線上履歷系統有限1500字元，希望各位大大能幫忙提供些意見，以便修改完善，非常感謝！
（手機排版，敬請見諒）
Dear Sir or Madam,
My major is transportation, which learned Marine Transportation, Tramp Shipping and logistics. Although I’m introverted and not used to the social place, I always keep active attitude to do my best and through club activities, part-time job and studying abroad to improve myself.
I’ve participated in voluntary club, English speech club and Guitar Club in university. Through them, I learned how to get along with others and developed the spirit of team work and the ability of turning ideas to act.
Moreover, I also have the experiences of part-time job, for example, I used free time to work on campus, be a professor’s assistant, and serve a receptionist of clinic. These experiences develop my patience, tolerance, capability of overcoming adversity and communication skills.
Due to desiring to expand horizon and improve English ability, in the final year of university, I went to Canada to be an exchange student. Through the opportunity, In addition to learning professional knowledge, it enriched me by communicating with others, experiencing diverse cultures and training the independent thinking.
Because I’m interested in marine transportation and container shipping, it is my dream to work in Evergreen Marine. Therefore, if I would be fortunately a member of your company, I will work hard in return. So, I hope to have the pleasure to obtain the interview.
感謝大大們耐心看完，謝謝！
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由於線上履歷系統有限1500字元，希望各位大大能幫忙提供些意見，以便修改完善，非常感謝！
（手機排版，敬請見諒）
Dear Sir or Madam,
My major is transportation, which learned Marine Transportation, Tramp Shipping and logistics. Although I’m introverted and not used to the social place, I always keep active attitude to do my best and through club activities, part-time job and studying abroad to improve myself.
I’ve participated in voluntary club, English speech club and Guitar Club in university. Through them, I learned how to get along with others and developed the spirit of team work and the ability of turning ideas to act.
Moreover, I also have the experiences of part-time job, for example, I used free time to work on campus, be a professor’s assistant, and serve a receptionist of clinic. These experiences develop my patience, tolerance, capability of overcoming adversity and communication skills.
Due to desiring to expand horizon and improve English ability, in the final year of university, I went to Canada to be an exchange student. Through the opportunity, In addition to learning professional knowledge, it enriched me by communicating with others, experiencing diverse cultures and training the independent thinking.
Because I’m interested in marine transportation and container shipping, it is my dream to work in Evergreen Marine. Therefore, if I would be fortunately a member of your company, I will work hard in return. So, I hope to have the pleasure to obtain the interview.
感謝大大們耐心看完，謝謝！
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