第二份工作自傳求批(含英文自傳)科技業 - offer

個人學經歷背景： 國立大學學士

欲應徵之職務： 科技業 工程師

自傳履歷內容：

爬了一些文 已經去掉很多不太重要的敘述

主要是英文自傳的部分可能比較有問題

自傳如下 還請各位大大幫忙提供建議 感謝

中文部分

﹝個人簡歷﹞
　　我畢業於國立XX大學－－機械與機電工程學系，個性開朗樂觀，
喜歡循序漸進的處理問題。大學期間參加兒服相關的服務性社團，曾
擔任社團的活動長及器材長，負責活動流程編列和內容籌劃；以及器
材準備和點檢等。

﹝工作經歷﹞
　　役畢後的第一份工作任職於台南的XXX公司－－一間螺帽製造廠，
於公司內擔任後製股的模具設計員一職。後製股負責的範圍是螺帽成
型之外的所有加工製程，例如攻牙、車削及包裝等的模具設計及技術
提供。於公司中負責的工作項目如下：
1.攻牙機模具設計：依照產品尺寸及外形設計模具。
2.多軸鑽孔機模具設計：依照產品要求設計各軸加工動作及模具設計。
3.CNC/NC車床模具設計：依照產品尺寸及外形設計模具。
4.現場工程異常排除：提供測試計畫或修改模具，協助現場排除異常。
5.包裝材料BOM表資料建立：建立現場作業時之標準用料及包裝資料。
6.新產品攻牙評估：新產品詢價時評估攻牙可行性。
7.主管交辦測試專案：驗證產品特性能否符合標準、測試新產品之可行
性等。

﹝未來期許﹞
　　在XXX公司近三年的時光，認識了很多資深的前輩，他們的經驗之
深令人佩服。讓我難解的問題，只要請教前輩們，總是能得到解決的脈
絡。期許自己有朝一日能成為這樣的人，在自己的專業領域中能暢所欲
言，面對問題時能夠一語中的。
　　我將以積極的心態面對每一件挑戰，並將所學融會貫通，與貴公司
共同精進。懇請貴公司給我這個機會加入行列。

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英文部分

﹝Resume﹞
I graduated from the National XXX University with a bachelor’s
degree in Mechanical and Electromechanical Engineering. I am a
cheerful and optimistic person, and I tend to deal with problems
step by step to ensure that everything is on the track.
During the university, I participated in a volunteer club. I
have served as the leader of activity and director of tools & materials
of the club, responsible for the planing of activity process and
content planning, as well as equipment preparation and inspection.
﹝Work experience﹞
My first job was at XXX Corp., a manufacturer of steel nuts.
I worked as a mold engineer in the post-production department,
responsible for all processes except forming, such as tapping,
prevailing torque, turning and packaging. My jobs were as follows:
1.Mold designing of tapping machine : design the molds according
to the size and shape of the product.
2.Mold designing of drilling machine : set up each axis machining
action and design mold according to the product requirements.
3.Mold designing of CNC/NC lathe: design the mold according to the
size and shape of the product.
4.Troubleshooting of production line engineering exceptions: Provide
test plans or modify molds to solve the problem of the production line.
5.Establishing packaging parts BOM data: set up the standard of packaging
process.
6.Evaluating the feasibility of New product: evaluate the feasibility of
tapping when the new product is inquired.
7.Completing the projects assigned by manager: for example, verifying
whether the product characteristics meet the standards and testing the
feasibility of special parts.
[Summary]
I can always face every challenge with a positive attitude, and
integrate what I learn to improve myself with you. I hope your company
offer me this opportunity to join you.


英文自傳是照中文翻過來的 不過英文的文法有一些真的不知如何表達

先謝謝大家了!


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